I've been following the old version of this story and I loved it. I was a little worried when I heard you were going to be re-writing it, but I'm loving it even more now. It's a little more mysterious than the previous version, you're letting the readers learn about Tess as the guys on the team get to know her, which is really good. I like how you're keeping us in the dark about the details of why Tessa is in Chicago. Can't wait to see where you take it :D
July 18th, 2011 at 04:20am
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