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  • Begreen23

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    YOU COULDN'T GIVE IT A HAPPY FUCKING ENDING?! SHE DIES, IN THE END WITH THE BABY TO LEAVE BRIAN ALL ALONE IN THE WORLD AND HER SISTER FEELING LIKE COMPLETE SHIT?! WHAT THE FFFUUUUCCCKKKK?????? THIS IS PURE FUCKARY!!!

    okay, now that I got my WTF out of my system, I just wanted to say that this was a really good story despite the fact the ending was disappointing as hell.
    March 28th, 2012 at 02:27am
  • dean ambrose.

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    That was the most sad, understanding, and at some part funny ending. You are a magician at this and should never stop writing.
    Kudos!
    December 21st, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • dean ambrose.

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    Jimmy :'D
    December 19th, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • dean ambrose.

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    I love this story. That is all.
    c:
    December 9th, 2011 at 08:08pm
  • dean ambrose.

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    They broke up?! Oh snap.
    This should get good... c:
    December 5th, 2011 at 05:51pm
  • smallxface

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    Love this story!(: i just read those 50 chapters in about 2 hours C: <3
    December 5th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • dean ambrose.

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    They're married! :D This was so cute, you have no idea.
    November 26th, 2011 at 07:08pm
  • dean ambrose.

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    This chapter was amazing, even if they were fighting.
    You write them both so well, it's unbelievable!
    Update when you can!(:
    November 21st, 2011 at 03:15pm
  • dean ambrose.

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    You are welcome!(:
    Anytime Jimmy is in trouble, a lot of people write it all terribly. But you did a good job :'D
    Update soon!
    November 17th, 2011 at 04:44pm
  • dean ambrose.

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    "And it's not even 10AM! That's the way, Gates!" XD Nevermind, this is my new favorite chapter!
    November 15th, 2011 at 01:18am
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    "And it's not even 10AM! That's the way, Gates!" XD Nevermind, this is my new favorite chapter!
    November 15th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • dean ambrose.

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    "And it's not even 10AM! That's the way, Gates!" XD Nevermind, this is my new favorite chapter!
    November 15th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • Lady Venturestein

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    ”I'll buy you so many pairs of shoes that my dick will never leave your mouth again,” he murmured to me.

    BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That line was pure genius! XD! The update was wonderful! Please update again soon!
    November 15th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • dean ambrose.

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    Oh no D: And I think the ending is near, too. But not like ending it in the next two chapters. Like a gradual ending, ya know?
    November 7th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • dean ambrose.

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    Your Author's Notes aren't boring like a lot of the other ones :P
    Amanda finally gets to go on tour with Brian and the guys! That kind of made my day, cannot lie.
    Update soon! :D
    November 2nd, 2011 at 07:36pm
  • dean ambrose.

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    They are so cute, it's almost too much to handle! (:
    You have an amazing story, keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next update!
    October 31st, 2011 at 04:58pm
  • dean ambrose.

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    Australia? You lucky, lucky girl! :P
    Okay, anyway, this story is keeping me on my toes. I love it so much <3
    October 20th, 2011 at 11:08pm
  • Lady Venturestein

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    A couple of things:

    1) I found your story today and haven't stopped reading it. It's amazing!

    2) ”That's exactly why we love each other. We're stupid and like groping each other's boobs. I think we're pretty much perfect for each other.” <-- This line killed me! XD!

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    3) You can't just stop there! Please, please, please update soon?????
    October 19th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • dean ambrose.

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    :O
    October 19th, 2011 at 12:50am
  • dean ambrose.

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    Amanda's right, they are allowed to get cheesy! But it cute (:
    You're welcome, and thank you so much! Getting that compliment made my day brighter! This chapter was super cute, cannot wait for the next update!(:
    October 16th, 2011 at 06:47pm
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