Paint Fumes and Sock Mountains - Comments

Wow. I love your style of writing. As said before , you characterize the guys so well and damn the sex was hot. You have talent and I am very, very glad that I stumbled across this one-shot!

Okay so I don't usually read smutty stories because they make
me blush terribly even though I'm nearly 20 years old, but you know.
I saw that you had a new story up and was all askdfslkdfjslkdfjslkfj
because I loved Out so much, but anyways. So I read this entire
thing, without even skipping the really naughty parts, because you
seriously write so fucking amazingly that I didn't want to miss a single
word, you know? The dialogue was absolute perfection, it was so funny
and cute and real and just perfect, because that seems to me how things
would really be like, you know? I say you know way too much.
But the way you write it so unique and original, you have this perfect mix
of description and flow and humor and just everything, that I had to stop
by and let you know how good I thought this was. And really, "good" is
probably the worst adjectives I could even use because this was so much
more than that. As a writer, and I'm being serious here, I think you are one
of the most gifted writers I've ever come across ever, so.

You started writing this in the shower. Oh my god, the images flying through my head, lmfao.
But I thought thi was pretty cute, all hormones aside. Frank is just. Ugh. Adorable. And Gerard's so considerate and cute. I love them both.

That was pretty adorable. I liked Frank's pink accessories, freaking cute. You characterized both of them very well, but especially Gerard and his insecurities. It was very well written, like the super detail to the movements and setting. Very good! I kind of want to read more about their relationship in this story, like expand the one-shot or something }:D