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September 29th, 2023 at 08:28am
Hi,
Ermm, gripping title and I like the plot idea however a few spelling mistakes here and there... 'Polite', and 'Throw' - I don't wish to be mean :( .
For me, this is too closely linked with the film and it ruins the creativity of it... However I love the idea of Jack having a twin and that Jade was intergrated into the story.
Libby x