July 23rd, 2011 at 01:39am
This was worded so beautifully and delicately, yet it felt a little dirty, grimey. Like the town they lived in was worn down. The emotion you displayed was just heartbreaking. Him apologizing to his sister and actually falling asleep at her grave. It made me cry. And it gave me this feel..as if murders happen all the time (you mentioned they do in that town) and it wasn't a big deal. Just another girl who has died and no one will care next week. Such a strong story. And the layout was so pretty.
Also, when the story had mentioned they were in Scotland, I started reading the dialogue in a Scottish accent. I really love accents.
This was an excellent story, by the way.