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  • whatcanido

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    hahah thanks :) i knew it would be too clichéd if i did that so i stuck with the hate :) i did make her a headstrong character and i'm doubtful i'll ever stray from that mindset. and i'm glad you did too :) i hope you enjoy the story!
    August 3rd, 2011 at 08:47am
  • The Hallows

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    I love this story!
    I'm so glad I stumbled on it.

    Update soon :D
    August 3rd, 2011 at 05:03am
  • Taste

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    I loved it, she stood her ground. I hate when people write silly stuff like 'I hate him I will never forgive him!' one chapter later 'OMG! Your the best person ever I love you!'.

    (I don't write like that It was an example.)
    August 3rd, 2011 at 03:42am
  • whatcanido

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    haha i will :) well update anyways! you'll have to see how the story goes like everyone else!
    August 1st, 2011 at 08:19am
  • I'm Your Apocalypse

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    but punish him and make him work for the friendship!
    August 1st, 2011 at 08:12am
  • I'm Your Apocalypse

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    Please Update and don't leave Viktor out in the cold! He is awesome!
    August 1st, 2011 at 08:11am
  • whatcanido

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    hahah exactly :) had to throw in some sort of surprise! keeps it interesting
    July 29th, 2011 at 09:02pm
  • Taste

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    I hated that he didn't choose her, no matter how good it made the story. Betrayal in my eyes. Shun him to the deepest corners of hell. I don't take kindly to people who abandon friends because they think they found something better. >:I

    But the story was awesome.
    July 29th, 2011 at 07:42pm
  • whatcanido

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    yeah see i originally wrote out the next chapter which made the transition very easily, but right as i was about to post it i realized something.... i made the first trial the second trial by accident and that i had almost completely skipped the Yule ball and that her parent's disappearance would be totally off according to the timeline so i had to whip together two chapters in an hour and fix the third one :P i felt really bad because they were kind of crappy but it was the best i could do on such short notice.

    and i threw in that twist there just to confuse everyone :D you probably won't know who she ends up with or even if she ends up with anyone at all until near the end of the story, hopefully.
    July 27th, 2011 at 03:05pm
  • Taste

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    Long time no comment I know, but I work 12 hours a day Mon-Thurs so I'm luck I even had time to read today!

    Anyways one huge thing, you have to take those links out of the story put them down in the writers comment at the bottom of some one will report it and your story will get taken off! I have had this happen!

    I got confused it seemed that in chapter 7 it went from slow going to super fast and it left me whip lashed.

    But other then that I like it so far, just when I think that I figured out who your going to ship her with (Harry) you turn around and throw Draco in there.

    Well sorry to here your sick get well soon and update!
    July 27th, 2011 at 02:14pm
  • whatcanido

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    oh thank god you noticed! i meant to change that but totally forgot! you are my absolute life saver!! :) i made the characters when i first wrote the summary of the story, did research, then forgot to change it. thank you!!! :3
    July 27th, 2011 at 08:10am
  • RainbowZebraCupcake

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    I love your story! I'm just confused about one part. The main character is 16, but in the same year Harry Potter, during the Tri Wizard tournament. And he was in his fourth year. So he was like 14 or 15...? Just confuzzled me a little. But your story is so good, and I love reading it (:
    July 27th, 2011 at 08:00am
  • whatcanido

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    hahah definitely :) if she even DOES end up with someone at all in the story, but i'll keep you guessing just for fun :)
    July 27th, 2011 at 05:43am
  • TheMiniKitty

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    Lovin The Story! iThink This Is Going To Be An Awesome Story:)
    Im Really Excited To See Who She Ends Up With But iGuess I'll Juss Have To Wait It Out And See
    July 27th, 2011 at 05:10am
  • whatcanido

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    haha well like i said before :) i like to keep my readers guessing, it could be a romance, or not a romance at all maybe just an adventure story. you never know :D and i really do enjoy it when people give me their insight :3 I've never written a story and posted it. i'm very shy about y writing and i appreciate anything i can get
    July 24th, 2011 at 04:21am
  • Taste

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    Well I liked the update, kind of hopping it's a Ron romance. I truly haven't seen many of those. Any who is was just long enough but I wish it had a bit more unf to it, something more then a filler. But I'm sure something big will happen in the next few chapters, or at least I'm hopping.

    (I'm not like most readers either, I praise and criticize according to what I read.)
    July 24th, 2011 at 04:10am
  • whatcanido

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    hahah i will :) and you'll just have to wait and see. The best part is that i'll keep you guessing throughout the story until i finish it! MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! see, i'm not like most writers :) i leave you hanging and wondering about so many things until the next chapter!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 03:47pm
  • Taste

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    >:D I love how she told Draco off, not entirely sure who this romance is about. (Draco, Vik, Harry?) But I loved it none the less.

    I could really imagine their entrance a hooded figure throwing blue flames across the great hall as Vik marches to the front.

    Not sure if Harry would ever approach someone without the rest of the trio but for fiction sake lets continue with a braver more outspoken Harry. :)

    Even if you did update again today, addiction is never satisfied so hurry along with the next. Hopping you'll have it up Sunday. <3
    July 22nd, 2011 at 11:43am
  • whatcanido

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    if you read the latest chapter i'll be away for two days :( but i have the series all mapped out in my head already! i really hope guys will enjoy everything i have planned :3
    July 22nd, 2011 at 09:59am
  • Fallenangel_97

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    i love the idea and the story so far, update soon?
    July 22nd, 2011 at 08:18am