I think this is beautifully written. :) There's just so much imagery, and it all really flows the story along in a dream-like state. I like how the lyrics also aid the story, even if they're just fragments at their placement, they really speak other volumes for the rest of the narration. I also like how there wasn't any dialogue - or the only dialogue that could be seen as such was contained in the lyrics, so someone else kind of expressing what couldn't be expressed in the narration? I don't know, but it was rather lovely to read, and it complimented the lyrics well. :)
July 21st, 2011 at 12:19pm