August 6th, 2011 at 01:43am
Okay, first, I love the banner. The layout is simple but appealing, and I very much like it.
I also enjoy the repetition of those words. Like, upupup. It adds a very nice touch to the story. And I very much like how you get a feel for the characters in the first chapter. You get a very nice taste of their personalities, and it's very wonderful. I think my favorite is the last girl, though. She just seems to be the strangest, and I like her.
It has a horror movie-like feel and I love horror movies, so you defiantly got me there. You have a wonderful writing style, and it all makes me want to read moremoremore. ;) I'm so subscribing.
I really want to know aobut these mysterious voicemails so I am subscribing.