Hot old fucks is absolutely okay with me :) lol something i and the blood bath was interesting... and i loved the parts were she just tries to piss syn off that sounds like something i would do lol!
Oh so it's only going to be solely about Synyster? X3 I can live with that! XD But I loved how Alex was getting under Syn's skin but dancing with Marco, too bad she had to kill him. For a second there I thought some was attacking them but it was actually the plan to lock the humans in with the vampire so they could feed. I bet Synyster is satisfied now that Alex has become a full fledge vampire since Alex couldn't resist her inner demon, I cannot wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haha now i feel like a jerk. You could probably twist it some way to allow a love triangle. But I do really love this story and I'm sorry if I came off bitchy
Also, in a previous chapter, you stated Alex as 'branded' essentially saying that she is brian's and no one else's, so a love triangle would make that invalid, but that's the thing keeping her at his manor.
I love this! It's very well-written. As for a love triangle, I say no. I think it would be interesting enough to see how Brian and Alex's relationship grows and Alex's struggle with becoming a vampire. A love triangle might over-do it. Just my opinion :)
I haven't really read anything on mibba in a while, but this story has made me want to keep coming back. It has a fresh introduction, and you have the potential to build alot around it. A love triangle would be cool, my guess is that your choosing Zacky?
I love this story it is definitely one of my favorites. I would love there to be a love triangle it should be between Syn and Shadows. I believe a love triangle would make this story even better then it all ready is. I cant wait for more please update again soon!
I would love to see how this love triangle would grow! I mean would it be inside the group or someone from the outside! And that her attitude doesn't faze any of the other vampires there since they just laugh and tell Syn that she is very feisty! She finally got to meet the rest the gang even though they already know she is. So Syn is planning to marry Alex since he referred to her as his girlfriend and since that hopefully that she doesn't kill him! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haha. Dude, my mom's 33, has her tongue pierced, 3 tattoos & is planning on getting a 4th. She's legit. (: You made the guys superr old. It's funny. Haha.
I have fallen deeply in love with your story! And Alex suffering the more disastrous events: Her father snapping, killing her whole family, from getting mauled and from a roller coster! And now Synyster has her within his grasp since he is her sire! I definitely love her attitude and how she makes things more comical to read! And her dress for the masquerade ball was gorgeous, now she has to feed from a human and become a full fledge vampire. I do feel bad that Emery died trying to keep her away from Synyster. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was no problem. I'm planning on getting mine pierced sooner or later. The dresses you picked out for Alex were gorgeous. I always wondered where people found all of these great dresses.