Life Is Short. - Comments

  • fooleish

    fooleish (205)

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    I will leave you a proper review one day but I would just like to say that this was amazing. The TARDIS got Rory drunk so he could have his wicked way with the Doctor! The Doctor's body temperature is rather comfortable! Raspberries! Rory unsnapping the Doctor's braces! Ugh. I'm sure I've said this before, but I love the mental images your words conjure. Happy face Also, the ending is perfect, I love the circularness of it. This is just perfect I love it so much how are you so wonderful?
    August 2nd, 2011 at 02:32am
  • D. Dixon

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    Like chachi. said, I don't know much about Doctor Who. Never seen the show, but also like she said, I was able to get it. :) I thought it was really cute and I enjoyed reading it! I loved the emotions; the confusion, the debate, the slight humor when the Doctor took the word "hot" literally. :) Great job, very well written, and I look forward to reading more of your stories!
    August 1st, 2011 at 11:58pm
  • goodbyeeeee

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    Okay, so I'm guessing this is a Doctor Who story. I don't really know much about it, but I'm sure I can understand the story, so here we go. :)
    I seriously LOL'ed, when the Doctor talked about his temperature being comfortable. lmao.
    So even though I didn't know what a TARDIS was or a Weeping Angel, or anything about the Doctor, I really, honestly liked reading this. It has that whole vibe that the Doctor loves Rory so he will make him happy type thing? I don't know. The whole part when the Doctor realizes that Rory is right is written very well. I truely enjoyed reading this. (:
    July 27th, 2011 at 06:47am