I'm here thanks to comment swap - I know this is a relatively old story so I'm not sure how useful my comment will be, but I do find it really interesting that you've chosen this subject in particular, I guess the holocaust tends to be a really touchy subject that's really hard to get just right. I read the first chapter and all I'll say is that the writing is a little dark, just a bit harsh on the eyes - and as for your actual writing you could try to include a little more emotion in the text from your characters! But other than that, it's pretty good :)
July 10th, 2019 at 11:05am