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  • Nevaeh_Flow_foREVer4

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    That was EPICCC!! way to go Zacky!! darn Preston, getting in the way... herma... anywho, loved it and i can't wait for the next update!!
    August 12th, 2012 at 08:23am
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    update soon again Very Happy Cool
    August 12th, 2012 at 05:42am
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    F*** YEAH!
    GO ZACKY GO! GO ZACKY! WOO NICELY DONE VENGEANCE!
    Hmm this Preston character seeming kind of fishe *shifty eyes* I think I need to buy a little camera. lol
    LOVED IT!
    August 12th, 2012 at 05:26am
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    The ending floored me! It was sweet yet shocking at the same time. Looks like Gena has her motives in a row. Ah Kiki and Jacoby will they ever get their shot? Only time shall tell. Preston...hmm there's something shady 'bout that boy. Of course only time shall tell.
    Nicely done.
    August 12th, 2012 at 04:47am
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    @ Skullchic
    haha trust me i'm going to try as often as i can!
    August 12th, 2012 at 02:20am
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    Update soon please Very Happy Cool
    August 12th, 2012 at 02:04am
  • hellz_belle

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    That was an amazing chapter Kiddo I thoroughly enjoyed it.
    June 8th, 2012 at 07:12pm
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    A short chapter but it was beautifully written. Your talent is impeccable my little sister. A great job. I am very excited to see what direction you take this now and if you need any help you know exactly who to call.
    I loved the chapter! KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WORK!!!
    February 10th, 2012 at 05:12am
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    You lie...you said this chapter sucked!!! Well this koala bear does not think so. Oh no! I thought it was an amazing chapter filled with amazing description. I could see the entire chapter in my head like it was on the silver screen. I loved it!!!
    You better post up chapter nine! lol Good job!
    January 3rd, 2012 at 05:42am
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    This is really cool. I like it a lot. :D
    January 2nd, 2012 at 04:41pm
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    VERY NICE. love it dear :D <3
    September 24th, 2011 at 06:40am
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    Chapter Seven
    I really dont remember ever brainstorming this with you and that is actually a good thing. Its important to an author to create their own world when it comes to their works. I did enjoy it. I honestly cant wait for chapter eight and I know you guys will be waiting for my first story on here and I will be hopefully posting it soon.
    September 11th, 2011 at 06:47pm
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    i was like WHHHOAAA MAN! when i got to end. haha loved it darling. keep at it, i'm expecting more :D
    August 27th, 2011 at 06:46am
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    Chapter Sixx
    Amazing! I did not expect an ending like that but it definitely made me smile.
    Great job Kiddo I'm very proud as always.
    August 27th, 2011 at 06:39am
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    That was a-mazing!
    I loved every minute of it!
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:07pm
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    dude, this is amazing. its so heart felt and funny as all get out!! can't wait for chapter 4 :D
    July 30th, 2011 at 03:40am
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    haha i loved this it was great!! and ur writing skizziles are amazing! LOVED IT!!
    July 29th, 2011 at 06:19am
  • hellz_belle

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    WOO! I'm ya first commenter EVAH on your stories.
    Johnny Christ don't I feel honored lol.
    I absolutely adore this story and I loved brainstorming and literally visualizing myself thwacking Jacoby Shaddix with a broom.
    You are awesome Kiddo!
    July 27th, 2011 at 05:06am
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