I really liked this!! It was great. The way you made Adrian is how I've always pictured her; out spoken and not afraid to hold back. And Billie was just...so good it was scary. I know this is a one shot, but I'd really like to see more to this story. It's all around great. Keep up the good work!! :D -Nikk
For some reason, in my head, I can't see Billie not wanting to have sex. xD This was cute and rather amusing. I liked how in the end he didn't make any conclusions or do anything drastic, just sort of laughed and went along like business as usual.
Hah, I like your layout. I'm not quite entirely sure if it's a pre-made or not, as I don't see that layout very often so I can't tell. But this story made me laugh, at how Billie Joe was worried about being gay and his inner voice monologue to himself, and for some reason, I just lol'd when he said he was fruity. Probably because it's not a phrase people use very often so yeah. x] This story was cute and funny :3
The way you made Adrian is how I've always pictured her; out spoken and not afraid to hold back.
And Billie was just...so good it was scary. I know this is a one shot, but I'd really like to see more to this story. It's all around great.
Keep up the good work!! :D
-Nikk