Pop. - Comments

Very creative. I actually related in so many levels, because one of the boys I work with loves annoying me, especially when I tell him to stop. The only thing that's really stopping me from kissing him like the girl did in this is because we also work with our parents, and that'd be so awkward on so many levels. And what's even weirder, I have hazel eyes and he has blue eyes - and God they're so gorgeous!

I’m not sure what drew me in on this story. I read it and the line underneath it, and just knew it would be good. I was not wrong. The layout was adorable, and made me think of bubble gum and blowing bubbles and giggling. I have no idea why. xD The entire oneshot was adorable in and of itself. I love how you put pop throughout the entire thing, and how he’s purposely doing it to make her angry. And then she decides to shut him up with a kiss. Nice touch, I washoping expecting that. I especially adored the second to last line about babies making the same noise when they want a kiss. I’ve not got much experience with babies, but that was hilarious. And then you had to throw in another pop at the end.

(I am aware smilies don’t work in comments. You can imagine I laughed a lot, yeah? )

<3 Haven

The layout was great...I loved how you made the title big and on the top, and the pattern matched the story easily. The font and color was easy to read. This story was so dang-on cute. I loved how the popping noise was getting on her nerves so bad she just kissed him, after realizing he wanted to be kissed. The ending was cute and unexpected, so it was just a really nice read. (:

adorable. (: i loved how it was different then most things that i've read, it was original.

Lmao that's cute C: I like. That's exactly the kinda guy I'm a sucker for - the really obnoxious ones that you want to punch, but they're just so adorable, you gotta love 'em <3 Great story, very well written.

That was funny and creative and just...I kind of awed at the end. :D I loved it! Great job!

The ending was very cute I have to say. I loved it and I loved the humor in this, how the boy is just so annoying that to shut him up she kisses him. I don't know if this is true or not - cute if it is - or even if they were dating, but it was a cute little read. Dunno how much the old lady had to do with it, but still. :D

Also, I don't make my story layouts small - only for drabbles. (; The layout for this was cute!

This is absolutely adorable. Well, it is at the end.

I love the way you slip easy detail in there, it never seems forced or too wordy. It's very easy-going, I like the way I read it in my head where I can just hear the frustration and annoyance. There's no names, really no detail on appearance, but I see them in my head and I feel like he's staring and smirking at her right in front of me. Really.

That last little bit about the babies was just...so cute. It was so clever and it made me smile. This was light-hearted and actually beautifully written. It's so short but I feel like I know the characters. All the repetition, the little pop added something special, you put them in the perfect places and gaah. I just can't even sum up how cute this was!