Heart At Sea - Comments

This is so so adorable.
I like the layout. It's simple and it matches well with the story.
The little talking starfish is just about the cutest thing ever and he made me smile. :3
This put me in such a lovely mood after I read it. :3
Great job!

your layout here is brill, oh my.

i love how you're taken that picture and given this girl a very luna lovegood personality, just airy and light and innocently all-knowing and understanding. i can't explain to you how easygoing this reads and how it's soft enough to make sense, even with a starfish talking to me. which usually would make me concerned and thinking you're a bit crazy; it just works.

it's a brilliant appreciation here and i'm sort of falling lin love with it. it's full of calmness and serenity and you are by far one of the most relaxing authors i've read in a very long time. you could make like, a book of all these soft stories and sell it and people like me who can't sleep could fall in love with these stories before dozing off. you make me feel warm and sleepy and i love it.

and then you'd be an awesomely happy billionaire and i don't see how this couldn't work out :P lovely <3

I liked this. It would be awsome to talk to starfish.

This was cute, short, simple, and straight to the point. :3 I loved the lay out and I could imagine the whole thing. I love this story. :3

Okayokayokay. Why would you everrrr think that this sucks? It's just SO cute and honestly, I haven't started reading it, but the layout and the cute mini-summary made me go awwww <3 Onto the actual review: This. Is just so massively adorable that I can't even. Yeah, it makes no sense at all, but I'm in love with this. I love how you describe the breeze and the sand between her toes and the water and everything. It definitely takes me back to California, when we used to go the beach once in a while when the weather permitted. <3 And I love the element of the little starfish. I can totally see it in front of me and I can imagine him as a cute little guy with big eyes and a squeaky voice. Omg, eek, so cute! <3 Actually, this whole little story was a gem in itself. I found absolutely nothing wrong with me. I love this so much (: Lovely job, Chels, as always! <333

In the first paragraph 'The wind blows continuously, making strands of my hair came out of the braid and fly loosly in the air.' I think you meant come instead of came & in the second 'The sand between my toes feels new; like the water that shortly after hit my ankles.' not sure what you meant there, maybe after isn't suppose to be there? or maybe it's just suppose to be worded differently & in the sixth 'Even though he couldn't, I knew that he'd nod is head if he could and would agree.' instead of is I think you meant his. Anyway first things first: the layout was just lovely. I loved the purple it went so well with your words. It was calm and stuff. I really loved this, it was so calming and it relaxed me. I loved the words you used and how she talked/kissed the starfish :3 Also, I love 50 First Dates :D

Omg i love it its amazing i think a little more imagrey and you have but came where it should have been come but other than that best thing i have read thank you so much for writing it x