And Then Some Fire Whiskey - Comments

  • Hmm... hmm hmm hmm...
    Your descriptions are great - especially in the RoR. I absolutely adored the image of Gerard stealing people's knickers xDDD
    However, there were quite a few typos that can easily be fixed and should be. There was also one part where you switched from "Mikey" to "Harry" and back again. It was where he was reminicing about DA, I believe.
    It did seem a little rushed though, but I like Gerard's character. And Alecto xD "Muggles ruined wizarding society..." Oh yes Hand
    August 3rd, 2011 at 06:19am
  • Oh goodness, where to begin xD

    The mash-up is a total mindfuck, to begin with xD Not that that's bad or anything.

    I can't quite say much as far as plot goes, but I DID giggle at Gee trying to think up how to kill Snape lmfao

    Some HP-verse innconsistancies, but none that can't be fixed.
    July 29th, 2011 at 11:40pm