The Time Capsule - Comments

Hello! Oh my goodness! Currently, I'm read up to chapter 18 and so much is happening! I really like your writing style. The story flow is at a nice pace, it doesn't seem too fast or slow.

The organization with the first person point of voice between Selena, James, Amber, and Greg. Also, this displays each of their character even more. There are many questions like what happened between Selena and James? Why did James cheat on her? Is there other memories that happened to Amber and Greg that the readers do not know about? I love these questions because it makes the readers, me specifically, want to continue reading and find out what's going to happen.

I thought it was really interesting that James still considered Selena as his best friend, in chapter two. That shows he perhaps still cares for her and shows his mentality on the situation.

Plot wise, it's thought-provoking, cute, and challenging as in the readers keep thinking of questions. They do not know what is going to happen. I have theories but none of which I'm like "I know exactly what's going to happen." Living in suspension is really good. I really enjoy reading your story! And I will continue doing so! :) Thank you!! :D

Love how it all came down to that time capsule! :) I should bury one, too! Ahaha! :) I'm so curious as to how Selena and James would have turned out.. I mean, they had a rough patch.. But I'm also wondering as to what they burried this time. Ôô guess some things are just bound to be not known..? ^^

@ darlingdoll
Haha, everyone wants a sequel! I wasn't planning on it but I may just have to create what my fans want. There will be a wedding scene for James and Selena, but I'm still working on it and I don't know when that will be out..I guess that could be seen as an epilogue. Thanks for the support!!
<3 Justrealizelife

This is an awesome story, I'm also reading damn the day I met you, but i loveeee this story...will there be an epiloge or sequel?

i just found this and read the whole thing. <3
I loved it. I agree with the people below... there should be a sequel with their children. That'd be amazing to see how they are 20 years later.

The summary was written fabulously. Extremely captivating. I did find it a bit hard to follow. Mostly due to it being so long. But thats more my issue. Long stories tend to lose my attention hah. But I thought it was wonderfully written and the concept was very nice. This was a cute and interesting story. :D You're way talented. Keep up the good work yeah? xoxox Ellie

I want to start off by saying I love the idea behind this story. Very original. It also kind of made me giggle to see the cast of Something Borrowed on the banner. Haha. The summary really caught my eye; I like character descriptions followed by a brief summary. I was pleasantly surprised to find that your characters are adults; typically all characters on this site are teenagers, or supernatural beings. This was just overall a really good, attention grabbing story. Great work! (:

I'm curious about what will happen when they open the next capsule, and what their kids will be like.. Sequel?

Have finally gotten through this (stupid work kept delaying me from continuing...) and I absolutely love it!!!

Can we get an epilogue? Of James and Selena's wedding =D I'll be a happy camper if you do =D

aww! I'm sad it's over, but it was really well written and adorable :D

i agree with deariloveyou
about how it was cool to end it in Selena's POV.
i shall miss this story...

I love how it ended in Selena's chapter since she started it too
gawd i just love this, it's so beautiful! hope when you edit it, you don't take out the last paragraph :3
you're a great writer, and i loved the story and how you ended it <3 at first i was like...what? is this a flashback or something? :P
AHH EBOOK :3 you better keep us posted about it ^-^
thanks for writing and sharing this with us, because i enjoyed reading it. great job, keep writing!

Omg I'm so sad that it's come to an end but I absolutely LOVED it!!!!
This was such a great story and I like the way you ended it :)

:O HE PROPOSED! AGAIN!! AND SHE SAID YES!! AHHHHHH
love it, can't wait to read more! the ending of that chapter was beautiful, i really liked it :3 the wording was nice ^-^ update soon!

Am I the only one not wanting this to end..?

i love this storyyy. xD

XD Amber's letter. Thanks for updating, amber and greg are so cute together ^-^ who knew she liked him in high school?
Love it, can't wait to read more! update soon, and good luck with your paper :)

I adore absolutely everything about the story!!! It's extremely well written and original. lovelovelove <3

Great job! I love this story so much! :D

Awwwwwwww that was sooo cute!!!!!
I loved it! Can't wait toread what Greg's letter saids.....
Hope you get your paper done and get some sleep!