The Monster in My Doorway - Comments

You can tell you're passionate about writing. I really like this story so far. I hope you update soon! :)

Let me just point out that it's very hard to write in this style and to make it work, but you do it perfectly. There hasn't been a lot written, and it's simple, but that's what makes it even more chilling and beautiful.

Please keep writing this, it's hard to find stories written in this style that are this wonderful.

Well, first off let me start by saying that if you hadn't told me in the author's note that this was a new style for you, I wouldn't have noticed at all.
This is quite compassionately written so far. I love the way you imply things without too much detail...
I didn’t want to die in this house, but the way he looked at me made me think I would.
There is so much feeling in just that one sentence. It's truly amazing. It's probably a good thing the chapters for this are shorter, or I would probably be bawling right now.

The way you present the mind of a child is masterful. The whole bit about "the silent game" was so very revealing as to what was going on, yet it's only chapter two.

I wanted to save her the entire time I was reading the third chapter. i get chills from reading about him.

I'm subscribing for sure.