I love the sunniness this has to it, totally whimsical and carefree, which is absolutely wonderful for the topic of choice. You do an amazing job of making the reader feel like a love-stricken teenager. One of my absolute parts is the use of the word "fortunate"--it does so many things! You could mean financially or just in luck or in love, and it implies a future, a destiny. Ugh, I love it. Also, the use of "trust" and "faith" in two totally different contexts, but still so closely related--wonderful. This is really an amazing piece.
August 9th, 2011 at 04:06am
