August 31st, 2011 at 12:56am
Another amazing drabble for me to gush over! Yes, I’ve officially become a stalker of yours.
All right! First, I’ll start on the title. You really had me thinking in an entirely different direction with the title, but that’s good. It still caught my eye and made me come take a peek. (That, and you wrote it. I mean, really?) Anyway! When I saw how you had the lines set up, my face was something like this --> 
It looks so good! It would have taken me ages to get that right. xD Now, onto the actual writing. As always, your writing is beautiful and flowing and you always know just what word to use to make the entire thing so, so perfect. The imagery and the confusion in this was so lovely, and it melded together amazingly. Once again, I hail your fantastic ability that I wish to someday ninja away from you.<3 Haven
It sounds like a poem, like a thought, like a dream.
You set it up perfectly.
I adore it.