Talking Over a Brick Wall - Comments

  • William T. Sherman

    William T. Sherman (100)

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    So, I read this one too! I have to tell you, I can't see the boy being like a Greek god mainly because, when I think Greek gods, I think of God of War, the video game, and I do not think you want your boy character looking like Kratos -- as sexy as that man is. Teehee.

    This story has potential. It's pretty good, has a good twist, mainly because you don't see faeries being that evil, they're generally nice creatures. So I hope you go into the faeries and why they are being evil and what caused them to be like that and what caused them to attack humans of all things!

    I wonder if you'll elaborate on her parents or bring any faerie characters into this -- I wonder where this is going to go, especially with how she has to assassinate that boy. Well, in any case, good luck and happy writings! (:
    August 8th, 2011 at 07:03pm
  • LaurenBieber2010

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    this is really good Alex! keep posting when you can, love yaaa <3
    August 3rd, 2011 at 11:45am