The Greenwood Shade - Comments

Aww that was super cute. Somehow, a fairytale suits them. I can't stand to see unhappy 2min either
Good job!

I loved this! First off, I really enjoy your writing. You write using a lot of detail but it's also simple at the same time, if that makes sense. Like, it's descriptive and well worded and everything but it's not overwhelming and too wordy at the same time.

I loved the fact that this was a fairytale because who doesn't like fairytales? It was just so lovely and simple and the ending was my favorite. Specifically the lines, 'His kingdom was restored. The long lost, blessed prince had returned. His long lost, beloved prince had returned.' It was just the perfect way to end this, I think.

This is marvelous so far. I really really love your ability to describe things such as the characters and the atmosphere. The way you also described the flames and when they started to burn the prince (who I think is Minho but I guess I'll find out) was so good that I could vividly picture. I just really enjoy this so far.