I can relate to this so much. Dancing around each other, not making the first move, just hinting at things... it's all so accurate. You've written this very well, I think. How it just goes on and on in circles and how they're both kind of having the same thoughts and doubts and everything. Really wonderful, how accurately you've portrayed my life in so few words. The last line is golden. I just really liked this. It was kind of airy and poetic but also real and relatable. (:
October 16th, 2011 at 06:09am