Wow, this is a beautiful piece. I've never seen anything written like this, where falling in love is referred through the reactions of the body, and that the girl is unsure as to what happened. You use very pretty language which helps picture the scene in my head. I thought that the length did this piece justice, anything longer and it wouldn't be as phenomenal. Great job!
I've never seen anything written like this, where falling in love is referred through the reactions of the body, and that the girl is unsure as to what happened.
You use very pretty language which helps picture the scene in my head. I thought that the length did this piece justice, anything longer and it wouldn't be as phenomenal.
Great job!