i would nto have expected that ending, justine, this is brilliant. once again, there are sentences that could be combined nicely. but it reads well enough the way it is. the theory for that to be perfect place to die is pretty legit, it's awesome. the nail similie was great, i love it.
your description here is superb, bby, seriously. some of the paragraphs seem a bit long, and i love how the very end has her regretting her choice. perhaps that could bring her parents more together, i hope. i'm sort of sad that she made this choice, but it shows the other side of suicide, that it's not always a good idea.
your description here is superb, bby, seriously. some of the paragraphs seem a bit long, and i love how the very end has her regretting her choice. perhaps that could bring her parents more together, i hope. i'm sort of sad that she made this choice, but it shows the other side of suicide, that it's not always a good idea.
it's brilll, justine, absolutely and positively.