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  • saint mungo.

    saint mungo. (150)

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    The summary was wonderful, I haven't seen a good summary like that one in ages. It gave enough information about the story to make a prospective reader want to read the actual story, but not enough that it spoils all the mystery the story is sure to soon reveal as it unravels. This was also very poetic, which I really loved.

    On another note, I really like the main characters name, Skylah Elliot.
    August 9th, 2011 at 05:48am
  • ruines.

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    Gosh, the summary doesn't tell enough ! I really liked the quote by Mother Janelle.
    I also would like to know what happened to her and what's going to happen with Skylah Elliot.
    This leaves a lot of questions but its a very good start :]
    August 9th, 2011 at 01:21am
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