And That's All It Took - Comments

This is so cute!!! I just love it. It's perfect every single way, even though I thought you should paragraph it more. It felt as if you had a lot of run-on sentences... But still AMAZING! The whole story was lovely and adorable. :)

Awww. I love love stories x3
I enjoyed this. I thought the way they met was funny and unique. It was great overall, but it wouldd be better with more punctuation and paragraphing.

Awesome! Good work

"Awww!" is really all I can say about this, it was so cute!

I, personally, loved your characters and how you describe the things that happen in their first encounter - adorable!

Your grammar is not horrible. The only mistakes I found are sentences that you should separate with some punctuation, and some missing commas after phrases like "I sighed" "I nodded" and "He double-checked, making sure..." <--- the comma goes after the first phrase. Other than that, it's perfectly fine!

Your layout was great too, and I really got a feel of the story. Great job!

Overall, I really enjoyed it and it made me smile loads! Keep writing! (:

So cute! I think my head just exploded.
The punctuation was great apart from one thing, you should try to paragraph it.
It's great to read a story like this, one with a happy ending to lighten up your day, one that will make you go, 'Awwwww' while reading.

I enjoyed it loads, good work.