December 21st, 2013 at 09:47pm
Improvements!
I'm such a happy panda. If you compare chapters four through six to chapters one through four, there were SO many improvements. I'm so happy (^_^).
That said, it may be in your best interest to edit the first couple of chapters, so you won't discourage any new reader that happens to come along. And I'm still waiting on that new plot element.
Will you surprise me again next time around?
Ellie x