Oh. My. FUCKING. GOD. I can't believe you updated!! I've been having a rough today and as soon as I found out you updated, I screamed. Not even lying. I seriously love this story with all of my heart!! This story and that Matt story you had was the stories that got me into A7X fanfiction on here. So, on to the chapter.. It was beautiful!! That conversation with Hay and her Mom on the phone was hilarious!! This was a brilliant update. I hope to read more soon and I'll check out your new story, also! <3
They just need to tell everyone that they're together already. >< It's rather annoying that they're pretending to not be and are having trouble acting the part. But Brian's a sweetie, and I love him. ^.^ And holy shit, are you doing a sequel to this? Be awesome if you did. Loved the update! :D
OMFG. Did you really just update? Or was I dreaming? Lol, anyways. I'm really fricken happy that you updated! It made my day! I love this story! & this chapter definitely made up for the long wait. Brian and Haliey are soo cute! I think Jimmy knows, or at least I have a feeling he does. I also think it's funny that they're keeping it to themselves until someone notices. I hope to read more soon. <3
Oh, they're way too cute. I liked the way Brian kept trying to convince her to shower with him. XD I'm wondering how long it'll take for someone to say something about them though. Jimmy must know or have an idea. Great update. :D
Aksjskjsickxndndocn!!!!!!!!!! I'm totally like flipping out right now! They're back! <3 I find it funny how Haliey was uncomfortable when Brian was in the bathroom even though they've had sex before. Lol. Now we just need Zacky to keep his lips away from Haliey & I think everything should be good. ;D btw I hope that whole passing out thing doesn't turn into something serious. :/ Anyways, this update was AMAZING!! I loved the whole thing! Can't wait to read more of your beautiful writing. <3
Yay! They're together! And he finally got over his stubborn self. Took way too long, but I'm happy now. ^.^ And she passed out from heartburn or indigestion? At least it's not serious, but I didn't know you could pass out from that. Loved the update!