Really good! And I actually can relate to this, however I can't even tell my family I love them nor hug them. And I can only tell my friends I love them when I'm drunk and they say it first or in text when drunk.. Anyway yeah great one shot!
Haha. I loved it!!! I literraly started yelling at my computer when she told him she loved him after he went out the door, then flipped out (in a good way), when she actually told him. :D Haha. Yea, so that was some awesomesauce stuff!!
I absolutely LOVE this one shot! I love the characters and I love the concept. And I wouldn't be opposed to this becoming a full blown story... just saying. SO anyways. Great job!
holy damn shit. that one-shot... is the cum-shot to my life. that one-shot just made my g-spot and my heart-string's go boi-yoi-yoing! no kidding.
not only that, but you made my goddang tear ducts come unhinged. that never happens. well, it does, but not over stuff like that. I cry at movies. songs. tv-shows. books... but fan fiction? yep. true story.