Do Bad Things - Comments

This is pretty good so far. I like how you've got a contrast between her and her friends. You've got a few minor errors within the story, some missing words as well.

But for now, I guess I just have to live with it.

There should be a comma after But as my mind instantly paused when reading that statement and any time you pause to take a breath should either be a comma or full. Just something to think about next time.

As for experiences with vampires, I hadn’t had many

The double use of hadn't/had is a bit of a redundant statement, like you couldn't find another way to word this:

As for experiences with vampires, I had very little.

or

As for experiences with vampire, I had not encountered many.

Those are only a couple examples but if you'd like to choose your own, you may. I didn't notice too many others from there on out, but if you just give it another once-over to edit I'm sure you'll be able to fix up some of your other mistakes. I've also noticed with the your sentencing structure it's very short and one liners and it's 'choppy' for a lack of better terms. I'd recommend re-reading and really fixing up some sentences because a lot of them can be joined together.

Overall, I'm glad I did decide to read this because it does have some good points. I've read other Eric Northman's story and none of them include Pam, I'd love to see if you do include her because I absolutely loved her characters in the show.

You should really keep writing ^-^
There aren't a lot of good quality True Blood fan fictions out there but this really seems to have potential. I really want to see where you take the story line and see Emily's character develop.
I really, truly, sincerely hope you keep writing. It'd be a waste if you didn't.

I dig, I dig. This is really interesting and for the first time in a while, I think I'm going to subscribe to a Mibba story and actually check back! I love the way you've set it up, though something about your main character makes me not quite warm up to her yet. Then again, it's only the first chapter so she may have some qualities that I do enjoy that are revealed in the future!

Your way of describing things is really interesting to read. I can't explain it, but I just really like it. You're very talented! The only thing I would suggest is getting rid of the picture in the summary, of the mouth. Doesn't fit with the rest of the theme.

Other than that, great job!