With a Flick of the Wrist - Comments

  • tiffany danielle

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    I really, really adore this story little mister. Every word in every line in every paragraph made my heart feel fluffy and my adorable meter spin so hard that it broke. It was that awesome and cute and just....amazing, aha. Perfect sums it up, too.C: And sweet, and funny, and, well, charming. I was giggling all over the place and my father probably thinks I've got problems, aha. But you know what? I'm okay with that because this story is worth it a million times over. <33 I'm sorry it took me so long to catch up, but I'm honestly glad I did. The only thing I'd say to work on would be watching your tenses, but other than that, I wish more updates out of you, kiddo. :) <33 Soooooon, pretty please? :3 <3
    September 1st, 2011 at 01:35am
  • emily browning

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    This is stunning, really. (: The layout, the chapters, the plot. Ugh I'm in love with this. It's cute, yet elegant. The words are simple, but they convey exactly what I think you're trying to say. I'm subscribing, and I'll be waiting for another update.
    August 21st, 2011 at 05:28am
  • nautical.

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    First off, I really do love the layout. It is so adorable, and light and airy and it just screams to be with a story like this. I really loved the colors, and banner, and everything.

    You have this style of writing that I really like. Faylene comes off as confident, but not rude or uptight. I just love the way you managed to write the characters and make them feel so real. But I think if I was Taylor, I wouldnt have accepted the fact I have a faerie so easily c:

    Im really curious about Leigh, and why he needs to see her again. He seems like a cute, sweet, easy going faerie, and I am wondering what type of role he will play in this.

    I really did like it. Im already suscribed, so, yeah. Great job. :3
    August 21st, 2011 at 05:28am
  • southpaw

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    This strikes me as something that Disney would make a movie out of; it's so cute and original. The characters are already interesting and I feel sorry for both Faylene and Taylor - something tells me that Faylene isn't exactly used to following orders, and I hope Taylor doesn't have to go through more bullying with her. D:
    Anyway, this is really refreshing and I'm looking forward to reading more. :D
    August 15th, 2011 at 02:43am
  • AliceHumanSacrifice.

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    Your summary really got my attention, so I was excited to begin reading. (: I honestly love fantasy stories, and sometimes I have a hard time reading them, but yours really got me intrigued. I like what you've created, Faylene is probably my favorite right now. I also like the Queen C: The layout is so light and happy, job well done there haha. I'm definitely going to subscribe. I'd like to read more <3
    August 14th, 2011 at 06:48pm
  • Em'ly

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    Normally, I'm not one of those fantasy kind of story readers, but I'm actually going to subscribe and finish reading this. It definitely deserves more than four comments.

    Your writing style is so sweet and quiet feeling. Beautiful and soft. I liked that the Queen is very cold and not familiar with everyone, just makes the reader root for Faylene more. :)
    August 14th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • tiffany danielle

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    This layout is absolutely adorable. :) Like, elegant, yet cute beyond belief. I find myself just marveling of it, gigglys. <3 Really. Also, I enjoy how readable it is. Like, their is no squinting or even thinking of hitting that default button. I think the only thing that could rival this beautiful layout would have to be your gorgeous words, hehe. :) I'm off to read. <33 c:

    I just got done reading the summary, and I do believe my heart did this little, "Eeeeeeeeeeep.<3" move where it just jumped for joy. This seems like it will turn out to be the cutest, most absolutely amazing thing I've read in a while. It's so cutsey, so romantic in that old way of thinking where everything is just pink glasses and happy heart beats, hehe. <33 I'm interested in Faylene (cute name! :3 <3 ) and her role as Fairy Godmother. Honestly, this seems like it's going to be the epitome of all fairytales, my wish life wrapped up in one elegant little package. <3 I'm so amped and all I've read is a summary, aha. Amazing job, really. (: <3

    Prologue

    I'm upset. Highly upset. Highly, incredibly, about to just roll around the floor sobbing upset. It's absolutely awful that this does not have thousands of comments. Really, this is beautiful. I like the idea, the cute, realistic innocence sounding this whole bit. It just made my heart melt. I loved the use of stars in a fantastical yet modern way and I adored how the queen could not pronounce the young one's name for a flying flip, gigglys. This story has a certain charm to it and really it's already won a spot in my heart. I am definitely subscribing. :) <3 If this comment didn't make it obvious, if there was any room left for questioning: I think you did an amazing job. :)
    August 13th, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • waves wash

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    I liked it. I wish I had a god mother. That would be nice.
    Please read and comment!
    August 13th, 2011 at 07:37am
  • nautical.

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    Im falling asleep so I cant write a decent comment, but I just wanted to say that I really do like it. Its a different idea, and it seems like it will turn out great. Suscribed :)
    August 13th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • blonde.

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    This is definately very original, which makes me increasingly happy. The layout goes very well with the overall theme. Bright colors when related to faries also makes me very happy. I love to see a writer really know how to handle a specific genre of choice.
    Great job, I did enjoy it. It was refreshingly different.
    Good luck darling.

    I almost forgot to mention how beautifuly relevant the title is to the story. I absolutely love it.
    August 12th, 2011 at 06:53am