October 25th, 2015 at 05:53am
Comment swap:
This was absolutely beautiful! It was well written, and I was definitely intrigued and it kept my attention the whole time! I like that this is something different from most of the things that you find on Mibba, and it was well executed! You are a talented writer and this story was one if my favorite that I've read here!!
I was hooked from the start. It was a good story. I didn't expect all the twist and turns though.
Nice job. :) Another story that didn't disappoint me!!