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  • khairena

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    OH MY GOSH KENNEDY IS SO SWEET. I love this story yes definitely.
    December 9th, 2012 at 04:41pm
  • asyousleep;

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    I can't believe Jane still can't remember things! THIS IS SO TRAMATIZING! haha Seriously, I just want her like fall asleep and be whip lashed with a bunch of memories so when she wakes up everything will be clear and people can be happy again! :3
    Poor Kenny! I feel bad for him - they must get together again!
    I love the last two lines of the last chapter - how she talks about feeling lost and just wanting to find her way again and her mom says that only she can do that herself. It was such a sweet and saddening moment.
    Oh! And when Ken was like "Hell no. I'm going to get my Jane back' PERFECTION KENNY YEH GO GETCH YO GIRL ;)
    This story is perfection!
    February 20th, 2012 at 12:14am
  • State Of Grace

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    This was good, but it sucks that Jane still didn't get her memory back even after talking with Lucas.

    Update soon though!
    January 16th, 2012 at 04:13pm
  • khairena

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    AAAA an update!! I'm so HAPPEH! :D
    January 16th, 2012 at 02:03pm
  • khairena

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    I love this story. So much. I hope Jane got her memory back, soon. Please updateee!
    January 8th, 2012 at 03:24pm
  • KennaMaine

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    Thanks for the mention! I love your stories! I can't wait for the new one about Dan Flint.(: 
    You're an amazing author. 
    I really hope Jane gets her memory back. I want her & Kennedy to be together again.(:
    November 30th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • State Of Grace

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    Gahhh I like don't know who's side I'm on. I wanna be with Kennedy because I mean Jane and Kennedy need to be together. But then I'm also with Jane because well she does need space to figure things out, and she isn't the same person she was before the accident.

    Anyways! Update as soon as possible! :D
    November 29th, 2011 at 03:40am
  • KennaMaine

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    Awww they broke up?! I want Jane to get her memory back.:( d'awww. I love this story.(:
    November 4th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • skatmurph24

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    I don't even know what to say; that was such a good chapter! I'm really upset that Jane left. I feel so bad for Kennedy. It would be interesting if she did remember everything in California. This is just a thought, but what if Lucas lies to her, and they get back together, then Kenny comes down and fixes it? That would start a lot of drama, and it could be cool. But I love this story; I've been reading the prequel all day, and I love the direction you're going with this. Please update soon :)
    October 22nd, 2011 at 08:11pm
  • State Of Grace

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    what about if jane broke up with kennedy (something along those lines) and then finaly remembered him??

    just an idea there
    September 29th, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • SoWrongItsJordii

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    I found this story tonight. I just read the prequel and all of this that you have so far and it's AMAZING! I love it!
    I really do hope she gets her memory back, poor Kennedy hasn't had sex in so long, it'd be killing him haha :)
    September 14th, 2011 at 01:16pm
  • mondayeyes;

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    Poor Kennedy he feels so bad
    September 3rd, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • State Of Grace

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    YES!! SHE WOKE UP!!!!! IM SO HAPPY!
    September 1st, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • State Of Grace

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    Ohhh I just want him to be better again! :(
    August 26th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • State Of Grace

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    i really hope kennedy stops blaming himself! it wasnt his fault! i just wanna like hug him or something! wow im crazy ok well cant wait for the next update!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 11:59pm
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    I'm so excited about this, I also I have an idea. I'm not sure if it will helpnyou at all but hereit is.

    An option for what y could do is have it be like idk a while before Jane wakes up and Kennedy meets this girl that's haloing Jim with sealing with the whole Jane thing, and so there getting really close and then one day Jane suddenly wakes up. I don't know something like that just an idea! Can't wait for the rest of the story,
    August 20th, 2011 at 12:35am