Layout: I wasn't too fond of the layout...the picture was too small for the story area and the white stripes in the background were just weird (though I know they probably came with the picture.) Content: This was such a nice little piece. I think it ended a little abruptly, though (and I know you were worried about finishing it). You lead up to Lilya and Ari's friendship, and the next chapter it's just like, "Yeah, he's not real. Maybe." I do like how Lilya wonders if Ari was even real though; that's a good twist and goes with the title. Songs: I can kinda see how this goes with "Brick by Boring Brick"...the fairytale world and such, but it ended up not being real. I also see how this goes with "Conspiracy", so great job. (:
Good luck, and thanks for entering in the contest!
Layout: I wasn't too fond of the layout...the picture was too small for the story area and the white stripes in the background were just weird (though I know they probably came with the picture.)
Content: This was such a nice little piece. I think it ended a little abruptly, though (and I know you were worried about finishing it). You lead up to Lilya and Ari's friendship, and the next chapter it's just like, "Yeah, he's not real. Maybe." I do like how Lilya wonders if Ari was even real though; that's a good twist and goes with the title.
Songs: I can kinda see how this goes with "Brick by Boring Brick"...the fairytale world and such, but it ended up not being real. I also see how this goes with "Conspiracy", so great job. (:
Good luck, and thanks for entering in the contest!