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  • Just.Another.One

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    Hi! I don't know if you'll see this but if you do, I was wondering if I could upload this story onto Wattpad. I understand if you don't but I love this so much and I have read it several times, it would be awesom if even more people could love this like me, thanks!
    September 1st, 2016 at 02:58am
  • Ella Joanne

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    I don't know how I feel right now. The final chapter in particular is so beautifully written and whilst a part of me was really hoping for a happy ending, I feel like this is very apt and it makes the whole thing seem so realistic. I don't know what to do now that this story has ended but I don't think you could have ended it any better than how you did. You have a serious talent for writing x
    May 27th, 2015 at 08:42pm
  • ewthatscute

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    Surprisingly, I am not sad. I feel relieved you know? Like something good is going to happen. At least I hope so you know? I don't need Ronnie or anyone else dead and having this be the foreshadowing. I have yet to read the sequel, but this is great. I loved it.
    April 3rd, 2015 at 08:38am
  • ewthatscute

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    Surprisingly, I am not sad. I feel relieved you know? Like something good is going to happen. At least I hope so you know? I don't need Ronnie or anyone else dead and having this be the foreshadowing. I have yet to read the sequel, but this is great. I loved it.
    April 3rd, 2015 at 08:37am
  • sam.the.sports.star

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    I can't wait for an update!
    March 30th, 2015 at 05:11am
  • Yuki Koneko

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    I think it's pretty good so far. Though, I did see a few mistakes in there. Though, it could just be that I'm tired. Anywho, so, why is she in an 11th grade class when she's only in 10th grade. I probably accedentily read over it since I'm tired, but still. Can you explain it to me? By! :3
    January 31st, 2015 at 06:15am
  • Zombiexlollipop

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    Great update! Except Gwen's right she is obsessed o.o
    January 27th, 2015 at 06:50am
  • ewthatscute

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    Daaaaaaang. What a great chapter!!!
    January 26th, 2015 at 08:03am
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    Well that last paragraph took away my breath the first scene pulled at my heart and the ultimatum as well as it's decision haunts my head
    January 23rd, 2015 at 05:51am
  • sam.the.sports.star

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    Absolutely obsessed, and of course that only fed my addiction so I will now greedily and shamelessly beg for more.
    January 22nd, 2015 at 01:31am
  • ewthatscute

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    Wow. This chapter was amazing.
    January 21st, 2015 at 07:16am
  • sam.the.sports.star

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    All I want for Christmas is an update!
    December 22nd, 2014 at 04:47am
  • ewthatscute

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    Yooooo. These are some great updates. I'm glad I finally got a chance to read them!
    November 24th, 2014 at 06:20pm
  • sam.the.sports.star

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    Amazing updates and holy hell am i excited for more!
    November 23rd, 2014 at 09:57pm
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    Man this story is beautiful i swear it's like someone saw a multi colored summer sunset(yes there's a difference)and just started typing i mean good it's beautiful really truly unbelievably gorgeous and somehow needs be published
    November 20th, 2014 at 01:24pm
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    @ Adventure Time.
    I totally didn't read it like that when i first found nope totally didn't happen
    November 16th, 2014 at 11:43am
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    OH MY FUCK YES I'VE BEEN SILENTLY BEGGING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER...I've been laughing out loud...my mom now thinks I'm insane or rather crazy
    November 16th, 2014 at 11:41am
  • Adventure Time.

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    omg this used to be one of my fav stories and i just came on here after like a year and read all 54 chapters in one day like i passed out at 2 AM reading and then as soon as i woke up i finished it like bruh you are an amazing writer and i don't really read fanfic anymore, but this is so well written that i couldn't stop. please keep writing and updating this so hopefully i can come on in like another 2 months and reread the whole thing again. you're an amazing writer and you have SO much talent; i hope you continue with this and all your other stories!!! <3
    November 15th, 2014 at 07:51pm
  • ewthatscute

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    Bruh. I can't wait until the next update!
    October 13th, 2014 at 06:24am
  • ERINELE

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    Perfect :)
    October 8th, 2014 at 03:25am