Two Young Men in Love - Comments

awwwwww:)
I don't really like when there's not really paragraphs and all the lines run together but you kept me reading and it was adorable at the end:)

You should make this into a story! I would subscribe and be your number 1 fan.

(I know I'm forever and a day late on this, but you can go read my note on the contest wall for more clarification)
Fuck you for making me cry! Seriously! That never happens, which is why it's a brownie point, I suppose lol.
But really, this story was so amazing. I can't believe I put off finishing the judging on this contest for so long. Stupid thing to do in the first place, but it also kept me from reading this beauty!
I love that you were actually able to pull off the two submissive boys. A lot of people had trouble with that one, and I think I probably would too. It's a hard hing to do, and you did it really well.
You also pulled off the pictures amazingly. I could totally envision those two being those characters, and you made them fit really well together.
This was just such an amazing story.
I seriously fell in love with this something fierce.
Great, great job on this. And good luck!