(I know I'm forever and a day late on this, but you can go read my note on the contest wall for more clarification) Okay, so I'm not too sure what to say about this, haha. It was kind of confusing all throughout, but it did get clearer at the end. This was certainly an interesting idea, and I think you pulled it off well. One thing that, for some odd reason, pulled me in was the guy saying "my dear beloved" in that language. It just seemed kind of mysterious and I really liked that. I know this comment sucks, but I honestly don't know what else to say. You definitely did a good job on this, and it was a really different idea - not bad, just a bit different.
Okay, so I'm not too sure what to say about this, haha.
It was kind of confusing all throughout, but it did get clearer at the end.
This was certainly an interesting idea, and I think you pulled it off well.
One thing that, for some odd reason, pulled me in was the guy saying "my dear beloved" in that language. It just seemed kind of mysterious and I really liked that.
I know this comment sucks, but I honestly don't know what else to say.
You definitely did a good job on this, and it was a really different idea - not bad, just a bit different.