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  • Mrs. Whirly

    Mrs. Whirly (155)

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    This was very interesting. And the picture is pretty cool. I'm glad you broke it into four chapters because it flowed better that way. It's crazy to think that this could happen. This kind of reminds me of an episode of Criminal Minds. sorry for the lack of words, I suck at leaving comments.

    I'm having a problem seeing how it goes with the theme of the contest though. Call me blind or something, but could you tell me how it has to do with self-destruction? Sometimes I have to be walked through.
    August 26th, 2011 at 03:51am