February 9th, 2012 at 10:14pm
I love this! It's beautifully written and I could imagine everything. I agree with the above commenter. You have an amazing way to describe things. It was eerie and mysterious, but at the same time, it was clear enough to imagine a vivid picture.
This must've been an amazing experience/dream.
Haha just kidding, that was really good writing! You should make a story based on that short.