Though it was very realistic with Stripper Heels, Im glad that you made them a happy ending instead. I really wasnt ready to see Cassie go through so much hurt and have more people hurt because of her. And I really didnt like how douche Kelvin still was, it didnt seem right at all. Cant wait to REALLY get inside Maddie's head though. But seriously, what about James??
To be honest, I'm disappointed in the ending change. :( I liked how realistic and unique it was. Most stories force a happy ending which makes it predictable for readers because no matter the conflict, the readers know that the characters will end up together since that's how most novels work. What made your story stand out was how shocking the end was and it made me want more. I was also looking forward to the chase again between Cassie and Kelvin in the sequel. But these are your characters so you know what's best. :) I doubt I'll be reading the sequel since I'm not interested in Maddie's story. Though I know it'll be a hit because you're a talented writer. ^-^ The best of luck!
ASDFG. GUH. GUUUH. GUUUHHHHHHH. NAU. NAu. nienneinneinneinneinneinneinneinneinneinneinnein. Cassie go back :,c your happiness counts too. GO BACK TO HEEIIIIMMMMM.
Wow kelvin is just falling apart. Then again so is our little Cassie. Though I really thought after all the emotions she was having for him she would be more distraught. Eh, who knows?? Please update soon I miss this story greatly!
I say "fuckin' finally!" Lol I know I'm one to talk but I've been waiting for this chapter for an eternity and it was brilliant. I would really like if Cassie had more love interests - Kelvin's jealousy makes my day.