Innocent Black Magic - Comments

  • Deadlihood

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    First Harry Potter fan fic I've ever read and I'm glad I'm losing my Potter-ginity to you :) Update soon?
    September 4th, 2011 at 04:15am
  • Merida

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    I can't wait for more!
    August 31st, 2011 at 05:05pm
  • LouellaBelle

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    I don't often read stories like this... but I must say... I'm a fan :)
    August 31st, 2011 at 06:48am
  • brittx7x

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    So I'm a Malfoy fan girl... not even going to lie. I'm reallllly looking foreward to this!!! Great job Desi!!
    August 29th, 2011 at 07:11am
  • Commiserate

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    I've never been a huge fan of Malfoy but I read a Draco story on here a while back that made me absolutely adore his character, even if I still hated him at the same time, so I'm giving you a chance with this one. I'm kind of with the first commenter on hoping it won't be too cliche, but since I've read (at least one of) your other stories, I'm putting my faith in you that it won't be! I can't wait to read more :)
    August 29th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • cattfeine

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    I like it so far - am hoping it won't turn into one of cliche stories though. But! You're an awesome girl so I'm giving this a chance.
    August 29th, 2011 at 12:59am
  • Merida

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    Your font is really small and hard to read. I am not a fan of the background and there are a few mistakes here and there, in the summary and first chapter. It seems like a good story so far, but depending on the road you take with this I may stop reading if it gets too cliché.
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:05pm