I thought the whole story was awesome. I loved how you wrote the story and how your words fit each other. Your writing is impeccable and I couldn't ask for anything better. Also, I don't really read a lot of oneshots so ik definitely not familiar with how it starts or ends but I think what you did was the perfect definition. I mean it wasnt too much or it wasn't cliff-hangery, if you know what I mean.
I really appreciate this and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. I wasn't lying when I told you I was flattered that you were rewarding me with this. And if you're wondering, I probably love it as much as u love your layout. (:
I hope to read more of your work soon since you really are a great writer (: