We Were Already Free - Comments

  • Dash Flintceschi

    Dash Flintceschi (100)

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    I genuinly giggled twice in a minute reading this!

    "Year nine biology for the win."
    "Why does his dad pick his nose in public?"

    I honestly cannot stop laughing at that! I'm getting weird looks for it and everything! I adored this, so much! I just kept thinking 'awww, poor Gav!' I really wanted them to get together at the end! If this didn't win, it should've! Imma go check out your other stuff now!

    <3
    January 25th, 2012 at 09:54am
  • in gold blood.

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    That was cute :)
    Gavin is precious, Sean is all moody and they were both so adorable.
    Thanks for entering this!
    September 15th, 2011 at 05:16pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    How did this story happen without me knowing?! :O xD
    I loved it
    But one thing I can't help wondering if how YOU managed without a sexy scene? Haha
    There's always one somewhere ;)
    I really liked how you wrote this one. It was different but smart with how you separated everything out
    my fav part, other than gav being all cute with the flowers, had to be gavins reaction to sean and ian in the shower. PRICLESS!
    And my iPod just autocorrected the word gavin with the word vagina... I laughed so hard xD
    oh... And I just realised that the shower thing sorta was a sexy moment lol
    Well Gav wasn't there so it doesn't count :)
    AND IM BACK AFTER BEING DEAD!
    I wanna say stuff but I hate typing on my iPod :@
    GRRRR ANNOYANCES
    But like the festival was amazing and guess what happened?
    You know you were like 'meet the blackout' and I was like 'i'll try but I doubt that'll happen' IT HAPPENED!!!!!!!
    <3
    And just incase I didn't make it clear, I LOVE this! Good stories don't need to have sex all the time haha :)
    Oh and I started Reading some of your Kyle burns stuff cz I really wanna get into forever the sickest kids
    I know a few of their songs but I heard one I hadn't heard in ages the other day and realised how good they were and how much I need to know them more
    So, the way I do that is listen to music (which was autocorrected to kewiis-however you spell it) annd Reading a load of fan fic haha

    ... Considering that I hate typing on my iPod I think I've said quite a lot... Oops :P
    September 4th, 2011 at 12:08am