Down in Flames - Comments

Update soon!

They better not get close and then have Matt come around being all rawr rawr rawr at them because I'll kick him. Really hard. In the shin.
I freaking love this story.
I can't wait to see what you with it :D

More soon please and thank you!

Aw, it's cute that Brian cares so much for her.
Matt needs to die. Just... he just needs to disappear off
the face of the earth, so Alyssa and Brian can be happy.
So they can have cute babies, lol.

Aw, I really want them to get together. Maybe this beach date will do it. Matt needs to go away. He already told Lyss he didn't want to love her, so why does he keep trying to get her? Great update :)

pfft. She don't need time! Brian is right there. She needs to open up and let him in before she pushes him away. He's doing so much for her!

It's understandable that Alyssa needs a little more time to adjust to an environment where she isn't being thrown around like a rag doll.
I mean Matt controlled her whole life and now she is getting back the freedom that Matt took away from her.
But Brian was really dishearten when Alyssa told him that she needed more time.
Brian will definitely treat Alyssa alot better than Mat has even did!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just say ur ready.

:( Lyssa just needs time. I'm sure Brian understands that.
More soon please!

I know she's not ready, but she needs to hurry up and get with him. Poor Brian got hurt :( And he obviously really cares. Just get with him, Lyss! Great update :)

Jump him woman, seriously, just jump him.
He's obviously hurt by her response :(
I feel so bad for the poor guy.
Matt you stupid prick, back off asshole.

LOVELOVELOVE!

They need to get together now!

Aww Brian is such a sweetheart...just what she needs :D
If only she knew that Brian shares those exact feeling she is feeling for him.
Great update

Brian is so sweet.
More soon please!!

Okay so I know I haven't commented on this story but I want you to know that I love it. I found it amusing that you and I have "twin" stories again. Once again they are so different but they are being written for the same contest (even though i'm so behind). But on from that.

ABOUT FUCKING TIME!
seriously I was sitting there reading this i'm going "how the hell is she staying with this dumbass when he keeps beating the shit out of her and disrespecting her in every way possible. I would have probably killed him, but that's just me. But yeah once she decided that she isn't going to be going back to that fucker and she decided to move in with Brian I was all like:

and then I was all like

and then when I found out that Alyssa has a crush on Brian I was all like

Okay so now that I have described the way I felt in images, you know exactly how much I love this story and all that jazz.
I seriously need to get my ass in gear, but then again I highly doubt I will beat you cause your entry seems wayyyyyyyy better then mine

Great update honey

Now she's with Brian! Finally, or at least
they'll be seeing a lot more of each other.
Alyssa first needs to get help and then
think about a relationship. she's been through
so much shit.
Loved the update, kayla :D

OMG Alyssa also has had a crush on Brian for a while now!
Probably when she first met but they just ended up becoming close friends but drifted apart when they left high school.
I am happy that she feels more at home when she first got there instead of how she felt when she use to live with Matt.
And now Brian trying to prove and be there for Alyssa and how her that he wants to be with her!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ugh, the squishiness is so cute!! =3
LOVE!!!!
I really hope it goes up hill for her from now on, though i see Matt popping up to raise hell, the bastard.
More soon please and thank you :D

She did WHAT???
Glad Brian is with her and taking care of her.
Matt needs to fuck off... Or die.

Aww Brian loves her :D
I'm so glad she's going to california with him.
Great update