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  • OurDeal

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    Update soon!
    September 28th, 2011 at 04:25am
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    They better not get close and then have Matt come around being all rawr rawr rawr at them because I'll kick him. Really hard. In the shin.
    I freaking love this story.
    I can't wait to see what you with it :D

    More soon please and thank you!
    September 28th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • CharmedLuna

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    Aw, it's cute that Brian cares so much for her.
    Matt needs to die. Just... he just needs to disappear off
    the face of the earth, so Alyssa and Brian can be happy.
    So they can have cute babies, lol.
    September 28th, 2011 at 02:45am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Aw, I really want them to get together. Maybe this beach date will do it. Matt needs to go away. He already told Lyss he didn't want to love her, so why does he keep trying to get her? Great update :)
    September 27th, 2011 at 10:23pm
  • atrocious

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    pfft. She don't need time! Brian is right there. She needs to open up and let him in before she pushes him away. He's doing so much for her!
    September 26th, 2011 at 05:26am
  • hachie

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    It's understandable that Alyssa needs a little more time to adjust to an environment where she isn't being thrown around like a rag doll.
    I mean Matt controlled her whole life and now she is getting back the freedom that Matt took away from her.
    But Brian was really dishearten when Alyssa told him that she needed more time.
    Brian will definitely treat Alyssa alot better than Mat has even did!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 25th, 2011 at 10:32pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Just say ur ready.
    September 25th, 2011 at 08:38pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    :( Lyssa just needs time. I'm sure Brian understands that.
    More soon please!
    September 25th, 2011 at 04:27pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    I know she's not ready, but she needs to hurry up and get with him. Poor Brian got hurt :( And he obviously really cares. Just get with him, Lyss! Great update :)
    September 25th, 2011 at 04:22pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    Jump him woman, seriously, just jump him.
    He's obviously hurt by her response :(
    I feel so bad for the poor guy.
    Matt you stupid prick, back off asshole.

    LOVELOVELOVE!
    September 25th, 2011 at 10:58am
  • atrocious

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    They need to get together now!
    September 25th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Aww Brian is such a sweetheart...just what she needs :D
    If only she knew that Brian shares those exact feeling she is feeling for him.
    Great update
    September 24th, 2011 at 04:03pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Brian is so sweet.
    More soon please!!
    September 24th, 2011 at 03:24pm
  • Dasha.

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    Okay so I know I haven't commented on this story but I want you to know that I love it. I found it amusing that you and I have "twin" stories again. Once again they are so different but they are being written for the same contest (even though i'm so behind). But on from that.
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    ABOUT FUCKING TIME! lmfao
    seriously I was sitting there reading this i'm going "how the hell is she staying with this dumbass when he keeps beating the shit out of her and disrespecting her in every way possible. I would have probably killed him, but that's just me. But yeah once she decided that she isn't going to be going back to that fucker and she decided to move in with Brian I was all like:
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    and then I was all like
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    and then when I found out that Alyssa has a crush on Brian I was all like
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    Okay so now that I have described the way I felt in images, you know exactly how much I love this story and all that jazz.
    I seriously need to get my ass in gear, but then again I highly doubt I will beat you cause your entry seems wayyyyyyyy better then mine lmfao
    September 24th, 2011 at 11:50am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Great update honey
    September 23rd, 2011 at 06:13pm
  • CharmedLuna

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    Now she's with Brian! Finally, or at least
    they'll be seeing a lot more of each other.
    Alyssa first needs to get help and then
    think about a relationship. she's been through
    so much shit.
    Loved the update, kayla :D
    September 23rd, 2011 at 05:38pm
  • hachie

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    OMG Alyssa also has had a crush on Brian for a while now!
    Probably when she first met but they just ended up becoming close friends but drifted apart when they left high school.
    I am happy that she feels more at home when she first got there instead of how she felt when she use to live with Matt.
    And now Brian trying to prove and be there for Alyssa and how her that he wants to be with her!
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 23rd, 2011 at 03:31pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    Ugh, the squishiness is so cute!! =3
    LOVE!!!!
    I really hope it goes up hill for her from now on, though i see Matt popping up to raise hell, the bastard.
    More soon please and thank you :D
    September 23rd, 2011 at 12:09pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    She did WHAT???
    Glad Brian is with her and taking care of her.
    Matt needs to fuck off... Or die.
    September 21st, 2011 at 08:32am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Aww Brian loves her :D
    I'm so glad she's going to california with him.
    Great update
    September 20th, 2011 at 12:37am