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  • CharmedLuna

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    Brian needs to just take her away.
    Kidnap her and take her away!
    September 11th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    Great update :) Poor Alyssa's too scared to admit anything though which is sad.
    September 11th, 2011 at 09:02pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    I can tell that Alyssa is scared to tell Brian that Matt abuses her but Brian can help her.
    Great update.
    September 11th, 2011 at 08:36pm
  • hachie

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    Man Alyssa must have been really tired if she didn't wake when Matt first tried to wake her up.
    Since she is alway alert but she seemed to be dead tired with the stress of pleasing Matt so she won't get beaten.
    So Brian is an early riser.
    Matt is one asshole that doesn't deserve to have Alyssa, she deserves someone that will treat her right and shower her will love!!!!
    I look forward to the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 11th, 2011 at 05:40pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    So close. She can do it! I know she can!
    More soon please!!
    September 11th, 2011 at 04:43pm
  • pjrox

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    Aw Brian
    September 11th, 2011 at 04:43pm
  • fieldgurl90210

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    I hope Brian manages to help her soon
    September 11th, 2011 at 04:16pm
  • DancingDays

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    It's so , so good. I wish Alyssa would let Brian help her instead of waiting on that waste that is Matt Tuck.
    September 11th, 2011 at 02:24pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    She needs to tell Brian and let him help her.
    September 11th, 2011 at 11:03am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Wonderful story so far!!
    Matt is a dick!!
    Brian needs to hurry and get her out before she ends up.... Not gonna say it!
    Please please please update soon!!
    September 10th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    I love it. Great update. Matt's an asshole, and I really hate him. Can't wait for more. :)
    September 10th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Great update.
    September 10th, 2011 at 10:27am
  • CharmedLuna

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    Matt. Tuck. Must. Die!
    September 10th, 2011 at 08:29am
  • DancingDays

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    Love it. I feel for Alyssa. Update soon! It's really good.
    September 10th, 2011 at 08:27am
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    Ugh, that guy is such a dick. I'm seriously hoping Brian just decks him. What a bastard.
    I love the updates! :D You're fantastic!
    More soon, please and thank you :D
    September 10th, 2011 at 07:31am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Loved it, and the fact that Brian knew something was up all along makes me like him more even if he never actually voiced it. Can't wait for more. :)
    September 10th, 2011 at 12:09am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love the update. Brian totally knows what's going on.
    September 9th, 2011 at 06:19pm
  • hachie

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    So Brian already knew that Matt was treating Alyssa wrong and seeing her face just confirmed his suspicions about it.
    Even though Alyssa's lie is very obvious that she was lying about the bruise on her eye.
    And he probably tell by the way she looks, she looks like a scared rabbit and who knows if Matt has been letting her eat properly.
    I believe what he said (“Well, pain doesn’t last forever,” Brian spoke, his eyes turning soft as he looked at Alyssa. “Even when you think it will, it fades away eventually.”) was give Alyssa hope that the pain she is going through will end now that Brian is there.
    I look forward to the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 9th, 2011 at 05:50pm
  • CharmedLuna

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    Brian is in! Okay, so it's normal for her to feel like that.
    She needs to do something about it. Brian already
    knows and it's only matter of time before shit
    hits the fan and she gets rescued :) Matt Tuck is scarier
    here than he was in mine, lol. Great job, Kayla.
    September 9th, 2011 at 05:06pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    God, i love this story. I really do. It's so well written and just, wonderful. Of course the content of the plot isn't but blah, i think you get me XD
    I really hope you update again soon, I can't wait for more!
    LOVE THIS!
    September 9th, 2011 at 12:50pm