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  • atrocious

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    I finally had the time to read this and oh my God! I freaking love this story to complete bits already. You're doing so well with making Matt into a bad guy. You've captured their relationship so wonderful. She loves him for the way he used to be, but hates this side of him. Eeep. I can't wait for more.
    September 5th, 2011 at 05:48am
  • hachie

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    Man Matt is one complete asshole!
    He only seeks his own pleasure and he doesn't care about Alyssa reaching hers.
    He doesn't care about what she wants, only that she keeps him pleased if not then he beats her.
    This relationship is wrong for Alyssa and she needs to get out before it gets worse.
    But Brian will be there and hopefully the abuse Matt gives her on a daily basic will be tone down!
    I cannot wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 4th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Great update honey. Matt is a douche.
    September 2nd, 2011 at 07:05am
  • CharmedLuna

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    Matt needs to burn, at least in this wonderful story.
    I hope he burns up in flames! Will he treat her the
    same when Brian is around? He probably won't
    he'll pretend to be a loving boyfriend and then
    back in their bedroom he'll become evil. Damn
    so psyched for this tehe
    September 2nd, 2011 at 04:01am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Great chapter. I feel so bad for Alyssa though. Can't wait for the next chapter.
    September 2nd, 2011 at 03:22am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Great chapter honey.
    September 2nd, 2011 at 02:28am
  • x-LozziePop-x

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    I don't usually like stories with Matt Tuck but I love this one so far :) Poor Alyssa :( x
    August 31st, 2011 at 05:40pm
  • pjrox

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    This is a bit exciting.
    August 31st, 2011 at 04:21pm
  • hachie

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    The minute that I read the summary, I have become hooked!
    This is the first Matt Tuck and Brian Haner Jr story that I have come across!
    Alyssa has really lost her identity since she always at every beck and call of Matt.
    She doesn't have the luxury to enjoy things she once cherished now she is a slave for Matt.
    I cannot wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 31st, 2011 at 07:23am
  • Synful Shadows

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    The summary got me hooked and now I'm really hooked reading the chapter. It's amazing. Can't wait for more :)
    August 31st, 2011 at 05:47am
  • CharmedLuna

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    With just this chapter I know it's going to be good.
    You did a great job. I can feel Alyssa's pain and fear.
    I wonder how is it going to go with Brian now :D
    August 31st, 2011 at 05:43am