A Place Where You Belong - Comments

Pleeeaaaasee make this into a full length! Pleeaaasseee!! <3

I loved this! I love Matt Tuck & I really love when I find a really sweet, cute & amazing story about him. Great work!

Just read this, and I could read it a thousand times over. It was so damn cute!

I just read this and I love it. More please! I think it would be great as a full story.

I reaaally hope this will yurn intto a full story!! i love it sooo much!!! it's great!! :)

Please, please, please tell me your making this into a full story!!!! I love it and I hope you do continue with it!!!!!!!!!!

you should make it into a long story please

HOLY CRAP!
So it was one of her cousins that her sex was banging in the bathroom!!!!!
Man the main family are going to be pissed!
But I do believe that you not writing in a smut was a great idea!
I mean Matt has really fallen for Arlene and she just ended her relationship with that cheating bastard, so they will have to take their time to pursue a possible relationship between them both!
I cannot wait for this to turn into a full length story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was so waiting for the smut, not gonna lie. Though, even without your incredible smutty scenes it was still a very interesting, and cute chapter. I liked it a lot and cannot wait to see more of their relationship and how it progresses.

I really believe that this story has the potential to become a full length story!
The plot is awesome!
Matt wanting Arlene, partially for how gorgeous she is but also her personality.
And then Matt having an ex that he had a child with.
Man that bastard Ricardo!!!!!
He has the audacity to demand Arlene who Matt is when he screwing another girl just minutes ago and Arlene caught them red handed!
I wonder if it was one of her relatives or a friend of the family.
Please consider making this into a full length story.
You could delve into how close Arlene and Matt get!
You always amaze me with your writing!!!!! XD

Full length story please! I love Matt Tuck and you haven't done a full on story for him yet! Please!(: haha i sound desperate(:

amazing. just amazing. the tamales made me hungry though. haha. Ihope this will become a full length stpry but its your choice not mine

I loved the first chapter! I hope you make this into a story!!! :D

I really liked this. I think it could be an excellent full length, especially since she seems to be so torn with her feelings. I cannot wait to see the second chapter, and possibly even more than that. You've really drawn me into this story and made me interested to see how they work things out and if they can become a couple or just partners in the studio.

This would be amazing as a two shot, or even a story? *hint hint* :)

This is amazing so far :D
I can't believe that her boyfriend cheated on her D< but she doesn't need Ricardo..she needs Matt. He understands her better and defintely falling for her. I wonder if they'll finally kiss.
I would really love to this be turned into a full length story :)

Wow, I am instantly hooked on this. It was amazing, I could see everything unfolding in my head. You are an amazing writer and I hope this continues. I would perfer a full length story, but if you want to make a two-shot that's okay but it would be great either way.

I really loved this first chapter, Kari. It was wonderfully written. I loved the torn feelings that Arlene felt for Matt and the fact that Ricardo cheated on her. I really liked how Matt was cocky and arrogant, but in a very good way. You were right, Kari; it changed my perception a bit from him. I think they're a great couple and I personally vote to make this into a full-length story. I think it has a lot of potential and that it could be a really amazing story, not just a two-shot. I can't wait to see where the second chapter leads and what will happen between Matt and Arlene. Great job, Kari! This was most definitely a great start to an amazing piece of writing!

:D its wonderful so far.