This chapter was really intense... I liked it, but I'm ready for her to go to Matt, tell him what happened, and hear him tell her it's going to be okay. I want to see her being protected again. The scene was AMAZING, the best I've ever read despite how brutal it was. Great job, I loved it as always!
Not to offend but the entire scene reminded me of SOA. When skinhead guys kidnap Gemma. It was pretty much the same. I love your stories but this kind of was weird for me, because I knew that it was based off of something else. I hope the next chapter is better..