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  • Meezy.

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    Incredible story.
    November 21st, 2011 at 10:53pm
  • YourATurdFace.

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    just started reading this and i LOVE it. please update soon :)
    November 21st, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • jessicajackdaw

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    woah was not expecting that!
    November 21st, 2011 at 09:38pm
  • shortygirl

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    Wow i was not expecting a kiss....im sure its nice to have let someone in
    November 21st, 2011 at 07:57pm
  • Refresh

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    I love this. c:
    Update soon?
    Please and thank you.
    November 21st, 2011 at 04:32pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I found this story today - and I love it! :D
    Especially the idea of it :)

    Update soon again.
    November 21st, 2011 at 02:26pm
  • shelbyvengeance

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    I found this story and i love it. I feel sorry for Olivia and what she has gone through.
    November 21st, 2011 at 01:06pm
  • jessicajackdaw

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    update sooooooon, this is one of my fav stories atm :) x
    November 20th, 2011 at 03:32pm
  • ItWasAlwaysBri

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    Wow... Val was a bitch... Like a total bitch... You made me hate her. I hope Matt does something about what Val said to Olivia and I hope the guys help Olivia with her uncle's abuse. Please update soon :)
    November 20th, 2011 at 01:13am
  • Sparkle Cat

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    Well, fuck. Woah. That was fucked up.
    I can't wait to know what happens next. O:
    November 19th, 2011 at 08:43am
  • chip

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    awesome story please update again
    November 19th, 2011 at 07:22am
  • stamfordbridge

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    gasp! that was a dramatic chapter! i loved it as always :)
    November 19th, 2011 at 06:19am
  • shortygirl

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    That was just fucked up..no deserves to be questioned like that....
    November 19th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • ItWasAlwaysBri

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    I really like this story! It's very different and intriguing, unlike a lot of stories that I have read. How is knowing that her uncle is working during winter break helping the guys know everything they need? Please Update! ASAP!!!!
    November 19th, 2011 at 04:54am
  • holleycarb1296

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    i love this story so good!
    November 19th, 2011 at 03:39am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    i love the story. it would be cool if she told them so they could help her deal with it. I like who you write :) and i would love to read more :)
    November 19th, 2011 at 03:07am
  • aveyluv

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    LOVE!!!!!!! more please??!!??
    November 19th, 2011 at 02:38am
  • XylonYuuka

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    Hey just discovered your story today and i absolutely love it! :D I really hope you update soon. :)
    November 19th, 2011 at 02:37am
  • Pineapplez

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    I looked up that Hollywood Undead song, and now I've been listening to it on repeat.

    I like the details about ballet in this story, but I have to wonder why she's using soft-toe instead of pointe shoes since she's constantly en pointe. I don't know more than a smidge about ballet, so it confused me to see soft shoes in the polyvore set.

    Definitely interesting story, even though abuse and depression themes are very overused in fanfiction.

    Sometimes I spot small typos that may have been caused by autocorrect.

    Overall good.
    November 19th, 2011 at 02:29am
  • stamfordbridge

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    i love your story, please update soon!
    November 19th, 2011 at 01:54am
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